Sunday, December 14, 2008
Generational Care
"Bread is like that to." he stated. Then we start to talk about papae. John is working/driving and is away. I tell my dad who is watching out for papae, he needs a chauffeur or someone to care for him some. What happens if he goes outside and slips on some ice. My dad confessed to papae eating premade stuff, nothing homemade, which is sad. Mamae always was cooking something. just sits there in the kitchen and nukes up something in the microwave. "I always remembered the table being full of different kinds of food when I ate over. Now Papae needs to go into some sort or retirement home. There are people his age to socialize with, which is good. Who does the shopping anyways?" I ask my dad. "John probably; all he eats is ready made stuff." Something my dad has always become aware in his home. My mother does not cook; her current food choices are: noodle soup, egg noodles with friend onions, fried hamburger buns with mustard, or microwavable french fries. "Well I thinks it was nice of you to bring papae home; we don't need him a ditch r anything" I tell my father as we pull into the parking lot and I walk into my room passing: Aunt Tina, Uncle Romeo, Marie, Becky and her kids, and start writing while listening to Amsterdam Dance Event Tunes 2008 .
Thursday, December 06, 2007
Wednesday, December 05, 2007
Creative Writing Summary
In Bender's writing piece, Refund, we go through a story where a middle aged couple with child in financial distress come up with a plan to help there finances. They will rent their apartment which is close to the towers for $3000 for a month. They receive an email and a the money, while the occupant, Kim, stays in their home for ten days the Twin Towers go away will 9-11.
Kim decides to leave early because of all the stress and mess. She sends Clarissa, the mother, an email demanding that she refund her money in full. Clarissa becomes a worried after the harassment continues. Clarissa sends an email back at the price she thinks is appropriate for the amount of time she actually spent. This does nothing with Kim, who ups the refund amount to $54,200 at the end of the story. Kim tells Clarissa that she will not stop the harassment until she gets her money.
I found this story enjoyable and easy reading. The little drama of a refund goes a long way to carry this story through to the end. Bender's writing is done well as you can see she has practiced a lot, and like to talk about love, politics and religion.
My Pet Taur
I was overjoyed with the news come by father in a letter from the north when I was ten. The letter said I was old enough to get my own pet and would have to choose amongst the great pets in the land. Father brought me on his Trojan horse to the druid master, Lychen, to choose.
We rode two days until we came to l’Acadie, where the druid master lives. “Cen, my dear boy, may have one pet from all the great pets I have encountered in my travels” Lychen said with his cold blue eyes. I looked and saw a room full of great creatures.
Tucked away in the corner he saw a sparkle and he knew he must have him. The steed was my age. “Father I want this one” I exclaimed with excitement in my eyes. He stood there sipping water from the fountain.
“His name is Taur” Lichen said as he same over to me and put his hand on my shoulder. “He has great power and one day that power when the time is right will become part of you. Here is a special saddle be careful”
I rode along side father on Taur. He was white with big strong legs and a headband encased with purple jewels. Taur jumped around with glee as he told me about where he was from. Taur grew up in the outskirts where the water crosses the path of the Indians. When his home had burned down Lychen rode by and saved him from the flames of death. That’s why he had the headband. With the jewels encased he could perform healing and protect his owner just as Lychen had for him.
Upon arriving home I took Taur around the camp to show my friends. They commented that he was a little off compared to the great hunting pets they had and couldn’t see past the jewels as they made fun of him. “Come Taur it’s getting late, father will worry.”
Mom and I made a special bed of hay for Taur next to my bunk. I sat there all night watching Taur sleep.
When I was thirteen a great storm had come, I had fallen off the roof helping father getting our home ready. I was paralyzed from my waist down. The doctors told me that I would have to wait to see if I got any use of my legs again. They did not. Taur told me that it was time the moon would rise tonight and tomorrow I would be able to walk again. He told me I would be great with hunting and to not be frightened.
The next morning I awoke. I didn’t feel any different until I stood up. Taur was gone. “Taur… Taur … where are you?”
“I am inside little Cen. Do not be frightened. Together with my great legs and your body we have become one as my father did years before. We shall be called Centaur.”